This I wonder sentences
Asking me Only on my thoughts and what problems may arise in the future.(passive voice, Fragment)
The Board of education asked me about my thoughts and about what problems may come in the future(active voice, Complete sentence).
They have a strict policy on what average a student must have to continue.(Undefined subject not complete thought)
Elizabethtown has a strict policy on what average student must have as a grade to continue as a student.( defined subject, complete thought
Thinking back what I consider to be my darkest moment was the time where I had found the light that I needed for my future. (Passive voice, run on)
When i look back what I consider to be the darkest moment, was where i had found the light to a brighter future. (Active voice complete sentence)
This I argue Sentences
There needs to be a changed with how the government spends money for programs, not rely on outside sources.(run on undefined subject)
The government must change on how the government’s spending on programs to feed the hungry. (defined subject complete sentence)
. For the food that is being provide now or can be afford are foods that are not filled with the nutritional needs of humans (cluncky sentence)
The food being provided now, or can be afford are foods not filled with the right nutritional needs.(less cluncky sentence)
If this does not seem feasible to many but at the moment there are over 50 million people not getting food or not getting the right nutrition.(cluncky sentence to many words)
This may not seem Feasible to some but at the moment over 50 million people are going hungry or not getting the right food.(Less clunky less words)
Asking me Only on my thoughts and what problems may arise in the future.(passive voice, Fragment)
The Board of education asked me about my thoughts and about what problems may come in the future(active voice, Complete sentence).
They have a strict policy on what average a student must have to continue.(Undefined subject not complete thought)
Elizabethtown has a strict policy on what average student must have as a grade to continue as a student.( defined subject, complete thought
Thinking back what I consider to be my darkest moment was the time where I had found the light that I needed for my future. (Passive voice, run on)
When i look back what I consider to be the darkest moment, was where i had found the light to a brighter future. (Active voice complete sentence)
This I argue Sentences
There needs to be a changed with how the government spends money for programs, not rely on outside sources.(run on undefined subject)
The government must change on how the government’s spending on programs to feed the hungry. (defined subject complete sentence)
. For the food that is being provide now or can be afford are foods that are not filled with the nutritional needs of humans (cluncky sentence)
The food being provided now, or can be afford are foods not filled with the right nutritional needs.(less cluncky sentence)
If this does not seem feasible to many but at the moment there are over 50 million people not getting food or not getting the right nutrition.(cluncky sentence to many words)
This may not seem Feasible to some but at the moment over 50 million people are going hungry or not getting the right food.(Less clunky less words)