When I look back at the semester I think I have improve quite alot as a writer. For I have a better idea of the style that I write. This will help me figure out what kind of problems I would face in future assignments. It also helps to know on how I can avoid the mistakes that I have found in my writing. There is also on knowing what kind of mindset I need to leave to improve my writing. For my writing style could be considered looking at a Greek pot. For if you notice in some of my earlier writing I write with a note of metaphor and exaggeration. This is good for writing fiction yet if a person is writing about a topic that needs focus then that subject would be less exaggerated. When looking back I feel like I also improved as a person too. For the class brought up topics that I had no idea where still major topics. To which I am happy to say that while my view on the world darken I appreciate the knowledge obtained. Tell me would such a lesson not be worth if you finally see the clouds of ignorance gone. Yet as the saying goes sometimes it is better to be ignorant then knowledgeable about a subject. With all my heart I hope that you have enjoyed my writings and be please with all my ideas For minds can only grow if they are all willing to talk and accept.
With A place at the Table it talks about how people are not getting the right nutrition. So the government made a Program called SNAP which is supposed to take care of this problem. Yet they are underfunded. I believe that they should increase the funding by 30% to make sure that the proper food can be given and bought by the people. The movie also goes on about the definition food insecurity, and starving. I believe that food insecurity is not having the knowledge of where they can obtain nutritional meal. With starving having gone without food for 15 days which is the halfway point before it is considered to be deadly. Solutions to this is to update the system of providing assistance and also transfer funds from subsidies to fruits and vegetables that way fruit prices will decrease while some of the junk food prices will increase. This then leading into a more gradual growth of fruit and vegetables being eaten and decrease obesity at the same time. While I do not live in a food desert I believe to solve the problem is to plant areas where fruits and vegetables can grow with groups of volunteers helping. Since there is a diversity of ways one can grow food of use of greenhouses to grow the necessary crops over the winters. I feel there is to much of a reliance on charities that is to drastic. I believe this could lead to a downfall for it has already happen in the past during the great depression. Like I mention before the government should move money from the certain crop farms to places where they offer fruit and vegetables growing the population to a healthier life style. The most common myth that is false for food banks is that it only gives to those who do not have a job when it is the opposite.
A Place at the Table is a documentary of how Americans are not receiving the right nutrition or food. They look at different areas to see what the situation is like for these Americans. They look into the lives of Rosie a fifth grader who lives in a suburban town, Barbie a single mother of two children who just lost her job and lives in Philadelphia, Janet who is checking out the situation. As the movie progresses it talks about facts and data on how children are not being the right amount of food or nutrition. The cast contribute this to an outdated system that tries to solve the problem. They also contribute that the government and stores not helping to stop the situation. This is seen where they show the government making more subsidies to farms that produce certain food products that make into things like chips than other farms that try to grow fruit. They also make note on how even though there has been people wanting change and also thee changes made do not help out these people. The crew looked a bit later at Barbie who after three months got a job but were left for worse because she got off food stamps now had less food to feed her children. Which mentioned in the movie causes great harm to children. For they are not getting the nutrients need to grow mentally and physically. The overall story is that while America is doing something to try to fix the problem there is still many who are being harm from the inactivity that politicians are committing.
The social systems that are in Redeployment is education and society. Education can be seen when the soldier is being condition to do his duty in war. Then there is also the effect of how this education affecting him in normal society. So as seen with this conflict is that when he is trying to readjust to normal society. Yet unfortunately that cause the problem of how they face an environment that he could not understand. There is also where he knew he had to take down the dog. This affecting him making it feel as if nothing was going to be felt. The problem with society is that they were not really caring that the man is having problems. But overall society unacceptance of this problem makes this story more interesting. Sin of ignorance seems to make some stories great. I just wish it did not transitioned into normal society as it had.
There are many ways people get distracted from work. For me personally I have to say there are quite a few that distract me. One such thing is social media cause a few distraction when I am writing. There are also youtube and other video things where somebody video production I find to be to good to miss. Yet I believe maybe I can improve as writer and try to stop with distractions by slowly taking them away. To me being a better writer means is to have the ability to convince almost anyone to your ideas. For this power this ability could change the world in so many ways. Since so many are looking voice to follow to be able to be this leader could mean a possibility lead to a world of peace. For this has been seen in history. Two famous cases that I can think of just off the bat that tried to do this is Martin Luther King Jr. and Jesus of Nazarath. In my opinion what keeps me from being a better writer is my problem with grammar. The problem is that my brain seems to move faster then what my grammar can keep up to my standards. Some strategies that I have found that helps me write is listening to music, make myself feel inspired, coming up with a web, thinking about the topic, reading it out loud, and asking for help. I have found if I had some sort of song that I like at the moment my mind comes up with ideas faster which sometimes helps me write more on topics. With this inspiration to a topic I feel like I am more involved and I am not just writing something for a grade, which in many cases I, feel great about. There is also the web where if I have something that is not really inspired I make a web and show points about main topic to put my thoughts out on paper. Sometimes when I am writing a topic I take a break and think is this the way I want to go or is there another way to do it. For it would be better to be half done and restart then fully done just to restart again. When I am done with a paper I have found that reading it out loud helps me find those mistakes that I made in my paper. Yet the best one out of all the choices is asking for help since usually even after rereading it, I miss mistakes or I was to prideful to make a change thinking it was so great. These ways I think I can improve and what I have found to be an order that I can work towards.
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