When I look back at the semester I think I have improve quite alot as a writer. For I have a better idea of the style that I write. This will help me figure out what kind of problems I would face in future assignments. It also helps to know on how I can avoid the mistakes that I have found in my writing. There is also on knowing what kind of mindset I need to leave to improve my writing. For my writing style could be considered looking at a Greek pot. For if you notice in some of my earlier writing I write with a note of metaphor and exaggeration. This is good for writing fiction yet if a person is writing about a topic that needs focus then that subject would be less exaggerated. When looking back I feel like I also improved as a person too. For the class brought up topics that I had no idea where still major topics. To which I am happy to say that while my view on the world darken I appreciate the knowledge obtained. Tell me would such a lesson not be worth if you finally see the clouds of ignorance gone. Yet as the saying goes sometimes it is better to be ignorant then knowledgeable about a subject. With all my heart I hope that you have enjoyed my writings and be please with all my ideas For minds can only grow if they are all willing to talk and accept.
This will come from my This I wonder essay rough draft. So this is a poem where I take parts of it and make into a poem.
\ 6/1 James Sabitino Composition The rain of choices Darkness surrounded me as time fly Fear strangled my organs I printed my speech in hope it was ready / \ Trying to be readmitted to college / l \ Had trouble in school for first time \ l / A time that no mistakes can be made \ / We rush taking the hour long ride We miss the turn Barely any time to spare My heart beating could be heard I stood before the wolves They asked me questions They try to find what went w rong Never allowing me to show my plan to fix I had my hand over the paper to go back another option of a term at community college I laid down the pen with no paper sign The social systems that are in Redeployment is education and society. Education can be seen when the soldier is being condition to do his duty in war. Then there is also the effect of how this education affecting him in normal society. So as seen with this conflict is that when he is trying to readjust to normal society. Yet unfortunately that cause the problem of how they face an environment that he could not understand. There is also where he knew he had to take down the dog. This affecting him making it feel as if nothing was going to be felt. The problem with society is that they were not really caring that the man is having problems. But overall society unacceptance of this problem makes this story more interesting. Sin of ignorance seems to make some stories great. I just wish it did not transitioned into normal society as it had.
The idea of blogging is interesting in my opinion for a class homework. In many cases it is bringing english classes to the twenty first century. In many cases with the creation of the website i feel like we can possibly grow. For many companies today are based off their social media and have hired many to come fix their problems. This as it is good for this means a better chance at getting a job. With hope more english class would obtain this style of teaching. For I think it can benefit many students and non students to improve their lot in life. For like what Sabitino said, about a job interview it would impress a boss creating a better opportunity to improve. the chance of getting money. Thus I hope that this style of teaching will grow for in my opinion it would bring a bright future. With this embrace into social media seems to be good. For there is also a less possible chance of a distraction on social media if it is already being accepted. So with hope this could stop a student from not listening to the teacher. There is also the possibility of looking in on a person ideas to get a better view of the other. Yet this could also be an invasion of privacy to a person. Yet with all technology advances there is a double edge sword. Which can be seen with guns other forms of social media and the internet. While all of these things are useful in some means there also the possibility of corruption. This is seen with internet pornography, killings, and also cyber bullying. Yet the good possibility in some cases can overlook some of these corrupt facts. I say that they should both be embraced but also feared for the possibility of corruption is sometimes to great for some. Where some will have to pay a debt that they did not want to pay.
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